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Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 02 2002,10:14)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">"Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace Here it is.
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i dont think something you wrote the day before is considered freestyle...</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Where did he say freestyle, flow doesnt mean freestyle, it just like sayin rhyme in a way. To me the best rhymes just come out of nowhere, and most don't write it down. I have made a couple pretty good rhymes that I pulled out of my ass, but they would never make it into production, unless it's a comedy cd. Sometimes you just sit there with your friends and start singing/rappin for no reason and make something that goes well, but then when you try its soo horrible.
Anyway about your rhyme, it might make a good poem, or a slow rap song.
You get an A for Effort <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='
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And about current rap, yes most of it sucks, thats why I began to listen to hip-hop more. Although I have just a buncbh of old CDs, I recommend Hi-Tek - Eternal Reflection <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>