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Originally Posted by J-DASH

HI my name is J-DASH and Im a member of son240sx.orgbut lets get to the topic I made a RAP song called"PUMP IT IN MY S13"....check it out @
www.myspace.com/jdashmusic
I look forward to hearing all of your comments please post them here.
ThanksJ-DASH

I'll get to you in a second.

Originally Posted by JDMS1lv1a

you should make a remix for a s14

i encourage you to make that remix y not?

Originally Posted by Andrew Bohan

uh oh it has the n-word
ban

true true, i head it and was like eh, dropped the N bomb tsk tsk.
think ahead, get the radio version out first

Originally Posted by jdm538

YO! i pump it in my s14 i have a stock ass clutch just something for me to get to school in.

hahahahahahaha awwesome!

Originally Posted by kdashy

J Dash?
GTFO.

Y? lol.

Originally Posted by jeeper_x

^^true, most of the s13's drivers do not have rear speakers in their cars....

i'm one of them

Originally Posted by J-DASH

edited version....is on the way for all the( pg 13) listeners...

good job

Originally Posted by s0apgun

its all about the treble

lol thats the only option most of us have

Originally Posted by Ltdnismoracer4

rims stay fly, door stay swing, bad ass clutch, just something for me to drift in.... I'm calling theme song for the next fast and furious joint

not the first time someone said this

Originally Posted by Unholy S14

hahahha jdash check the offtopic forum.

yeah i posted there thinking it was this one. thread merge

Originally Posted by ThatGuy

I hope you didn't expect all positive feedback.
Here's my comment from the thread already started about this in Off Topic:
I'm sure it took time and skill to make the song, I just don't care for it. I applaud your efforts though.

yeah get ready for all criticism, not just the good the bad as well. can't make everyone happy

Originally Posted by punch

This song is just as good if not better than all the bullshit mainstream hip hop that's out there.

your right about the bs thats out there now.

Originally Posted by PHLIP

While I respect your effort, I do not care for the song particularly.
I, too, could hear this promoting the next F&F movie, or any other movie about drifting in the near future, and that is not a good thing to anyone not directly profiting from it.

note again

Originally Posted by ThePenIsMightier

Very good sound quality and recording. You need a new chorus though. I can think of a better line than the one about the clutch, and I'm no rapper.
Keep it up though man. If you're going to write a song, it should relate to you and your hobbies. Good job.

help him out give him ideas about a new chorus

Originally Posted by ThatGuy

What good would I do him if I lied and only gave him positive feedback.
J-Dash didn't seem too fazed by it. He either didn't see it, or understands that if you post something on the internet you have to accept whatever feedback you get. In the thread in off topic, the author of the song was not present, so there was no need to offer any explanation of my opinion. In this thread, I was nice enough to add to my comments so that he might be able to use the criticism.
It's not "haterade" it's honesty.
BTW, there is no space in my name. I am ThatGuy, not That Guy.

this is what is meant by truth hurts! like if some random chic asks you hey does this make me look fat, ugly, noob, etc whatever... you say no or give her the truth and have her call you mean, @$$hole, douche nozzle whatever.

Originally Posted by Z33dori

def would rock that....full treble
keep it up..

about that bass in the s13. lol.

Originally Posted by blaze1

Seriously... you should add some funnier ironic shit that all 240 owners can relate too
ever heard the honda songs? (I love my honda from the bottom of my heart)
"My effed up maf turn my spark plugs into ash, I sell old ugly mesh wheels just to afford gas"
something we can relate to and laugh at...because our cars aren't that cool...
just a suggestion

where can i hear these honda songs??!?!?!?!?!?

Originally Posted by A Spec Products

This song better have bass
Cause if I download it Then burn it Then play in the hoopty (with the subs) And it don't pound? OHHHHHHHHHHHH disappointment

yeah don't be a poser.

ok J-DASH

I liked it. not crazy about it. you can't really take this song seriously. i guess thats why most people are laughing. i admit i added to your play count you could have done better. you did do nice with the sound effects too.yeah very professionally done track. checked your other track as well. not impressed. its sounds like the same ol stuff you hear on the radio. take every comment and learn from them. but you got some fans on here now. I'm one. you got my support. the only other things is, its been said before about being the next theme song. its like you took the bandwagon craze to the next level. cops and haters know what exactly what to look for :/ but 240's are the next civic, honda, integra, blah blah blah whatever. so you know your gonna get a lot of support from the 240 crowd right? but at the same time you'll piss people off. as seen in the two threads on zilvia. good luck in the future. added and suscribed!

PEACE!

o btw i really hope you have a 240.