[Future240]

Since you asked for feedback

The commercial seemed to lack focus. Are you advertising the barbershop or the butter?

The commercial gives no information on what the benefits of the product are.

I presume you are advertising the cream based on the video name. The product does not appear a lot in the commercial if you are.

If you are advertising both I think you would need to show more of the product and the shop itself. Maybe a slo mo shot of people walking into the shop with the sign clearly visible.

Preference but the music choice (royalty free I presume) is a bit grating.

I have not done it professionally but I have a degree in marketing.