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graphikg04 · 09-02-2002, 04:46 PM

Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace   Here it is.

My 240sx Flow

I drive a 240sx
And I take turns on every apex
My drifts are so tight like latex
My engine torque makes my front wheels lift
At the straight line and the sliding drift
I do it naturally I call it my gift
So smooth and so swift
That’s true you are afraid of the SR20DET
Silvia turbo spooling nice and free
Fireballs out of the exhaust
Everything is in my car I don’t care about the cost
You can tell because we are at the end and you just lost
You tried to keep up but you spun out and tossed
You just lost hope you spun out of the track
I'll even wait for you until you come back
And before you know it you will be lapped
I stay in 1st, 2nd is where you are trapped
There is no way you can win I always defeat
You thought you were good and I turned you into track meat
I only have one turbo but it seems like a fleet  
Nobody can compete when I sit in that seat

The Silvia emblem representing strong
My turbo boosts all day long
My car looks sexier than a girl in a thong
You are trying to race me? You got it all wrong
The engine revs make you pee your pants, but to me its a song
Because my engine came all the way from Hong Kong
My Potenza tires creating grip
I make racing look like a grocery trip
My car is so fast I make the world miss a revolution
Pressing the pedal harder is my solution
Now its time for me to get to my conclusion
I am graphikG, so backing off is yo resolution
PEACE

Tight huh?                                 graphikG

matic 240sx · 09-02-2002, 04:50 PM

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> dear god...

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 05:01 PM

i dont want to be harsh, but i think im with matic on this one...

*ca18guy* · 09-02-2002, 05:17 PM

HAHAHA man that is awesome.

BEISSEN · 09-02-2002, 05:20 PM

Oh my lord another oneabe sorry but that just did not rhyme all that well parts did but not a very good rap"if thats what it was".I am witht the rest of the guys.

toddnappi · 09-02-2002, 05:50 PM

that was pretty good. ever make beats on the computer? a couple of my friends have programs and have made some cool songs. you should try it out.

s14 · 09-02-2002, 05:50 PM

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA, my first post and its on this rap...Lord have mercy, the second verse was better than the first, but i was laughing the whole time... aight, now to go look at the real 240 stuff

S14

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 05:58 PM

ur engine came from hong kong? try japan...
and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow...
                          sorry i couldnt resist

SR20Fastback · 09-02-2002, 06:07 PM

You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it  <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

matic 240sx · 09-02-2002, 06:25 PM

if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop..

whateverjames · 09-02-2002, 06:54 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 01 2002,7:58)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">ur engine came from hong kong? try japan...
and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow...
sorry i couldnt resist</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
it's possible that one could import an SR from hong kong.

Rikadyn · 09-02-2002, 06:59 PM

hmm...funny...MOVE prolly would record it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='

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95exlude · 09-02-2002, 07:05 PM

sr was designed and blueprinted in japan   <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hehe.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hehe:'>

Rikadyn · 09-02-2002, 07:15 PM

still would be possible to import a SR from Hong Kong...also</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>

One-Eighty SX · 09-02-2002, 07:28 PM

i think it was ahite but it could have better flow to it as well. Also the Sr20 maybe designed and blueprinted in japan but u forget 95exlude that japan can sell their cars to other countries as well. So im sure its possible to import it from hong kong. Just that its home is japan that is all

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 08:08 PM

well transams are manufactured in canada...that doesnt mean they arent domestics -best example i can give ya

DriftMonkey · 09-02-2002, 08:09 PM

man you guys r harsh as hell....although i dont even like rap...i thought it was pretty good and i bet that half of you couldnt even write something as good....you ever try to write a poem...or a rap...it's hard as hell...props to you graphik

graphikg04 · 09-02-2002, 08:14 PM

Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG

  And drift monkey is right. A poem or a rap is not an easy thing to do. You try doing it and let me see how it is, I would love to see it. And just for your information. This was a freestyle while I was typing. When I take my time I write things that seem professional. I write poems for girls and all, and they never fail. I can get any girl with any of my poems. If you want to test me, you can email me. I will give you a copy of the poem. Then you can give it to a girl you like, and I bet she will fall dead for you. YES, I am that confident. Ive done it more than enough times. If you want to test me, my email is --  [email protected] -- PEACE

camppain · 09-02-2002, 08:17 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (matic 240sx @ Sep. 03 2002,07:25)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop..</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
im with the rest of them in saying its not good. i used to flow and i made beats but its not something imma make money
off of.

the rhyme scheme was to simple. to much first person "my 240 this" "i am beter at this" no real creativity imho. plus just cause its about a 240 does it make it a chat topic?

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 08:19 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (graphikg04 @ Sep. 02 2002,9:14)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Well you did what you wanted, it did make some of us laugh...and if they consider that talent then we have found exactly what is wrong with the music industry today.  We are just giving ya a hard time bro

shady · 09-02-2002, 08:59 PM

why dont you post some of these proffesional raps or poems that can get any girl so we can laugh at you some more

-E- · 09-02-2002, 09:10 PM

I liked it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 09:14 PM

"Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace   Here it is.
"

i dont think something you wrote the day before is considered freestyle...

Yonkaz914 · 09-02-2002, 09:27 PM

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='

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*AceInHole* · 09-02-2002, 09:55 PM

<!--QuoteBegin--SR20Fastback+Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>7)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
if it was on the radio it'd be playing on 3 different stations on repeat... then again look at radio quality

uke:

"it's gettin hot in herre"

95exlude · 09-02-2002, 10:08 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (Yonkaz914 @ Sep. 02 2002,10:27)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='

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Why Did You Capitalize Every Word In That Sentence?

SR20Fastback · 09-02-2002, 10:08 PM

</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (AceInHole @ Sep. 02 2002,8:55)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it <!--emo&<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
if it was on the radio it'd be playing on 3 different stations on repeat... then again look at radio quality

uke:

"it's gettin hot in herre"</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>
Oh sooooooo fucking sick of that nelly song, not even funny  <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/mad.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':angry:'> I was just tryin to say lay off the guy, he was just messin around and some people started layin into him pretty hard. It was just supposed to be something to laugh at, not something to use against him for flames...

matic 240sx · 09-02-2002, 10:21 PM

<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/dozingoff.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='

'>  what are you guys defending him for?  we are just saying our opinions..  and my opinion is it sucked..  tho im pretty sure that 80% of the hip-hop community will agree with me.. the other 20% will be to high to make a clear decision..  

most of you listen to that cracka sh*t :x

and yes.. im white  <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='

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S13Grl · 09-02-2002, 10:29 PM

You guys are too harsh. Let's not get out of control.

*AceInHole* · 09-02-2002, 10:33 PM

you know, what's really funny is that in winter I roll on Blizzaks,
but people too used to the radio might just think my tires are black.

09-02-2002, 04:46 PM	#1
graphikg04 Leaky Injector Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Pasadena Ca. Age: 38 Posts: 94 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace   Here it is. My 240sx Flow I drive a 240sx And I take turns on every apex My drifts are so tight like latex My engine torque makes my front wheels lift At the straight line and the sliding drift I do it naturally I call it my gift So smooth and so swift That’s true you are afraid of the SR20DET Silvia turbo spooling nice and free Fireballs out of the exhaust Everything is in my car I don’t care about the cost You can tell because we are at the end and you just lost You tried to keep up but you spun out and tossed You just lost hope you spun out of the track I'll even wait for you until you come back And before you know it you will be lapped I stay in 1st, 2nd is where you are trapped There is no way you can win I always defeat You thought you were good and I turned you into track meat I only have one turbo but it seems like a fleet   Nobody can compete when I sit in that seat The Silvia emblem representing strong My turbo boosts all day long My car looks sexier than a girl in a thong You are trying to race me? You got it all wrong The engine revs make you pee your pants, but to me its a song Because my engine came all the way from Hong Kong My Potenza tires creating grip I make racing look like a grocery trip My car is so fast I make the world miss a revolution Pressing the pedal harder is my solution Now its time for me to get to my conclusion I am graphikG, so backing off is yo resolution PEACE Tight huh?                                 graphikG __________________ You feel sorry for me because I am weird. I feel sorry for you because you are the same. http://community.webshots.com/album/43433065kNExxW

09-02-2002, 04:50 PM	#2
matic 240sx Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: las vegas Age: 42 Posts: 798 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: matic 240sx Feedback Score: 0 reviews	<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> dear god... __________________ · m á † í ç · after9racing.com

09-02-2002, 05:50 PM	#7
s14 Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: PA Posts: 63 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA, my first post and its on this rap...Lord have mercy, the second verse was better than the first, but i was laughing the whole time... aight, now to go look at the real 240 stuff S14 __________________ s14

09-02-2002, 06:07 PM	#9
SR20Fastback Nissanaholic! Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: The Bay Age: 40 Posts: 1,637 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it  <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'> __________________ Fodive STILL blows goats, I have proof.

09-02-2002, 06:25 PM	#10
matic 240sx Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: las vegas Age: 42 Posts: 798 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: matic 240sx Feedback Score: 0 reviews	if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop.. __________________ · m á † í ç · after9racing.com

09-02-2002, 05:01 PM	#3
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	i dont want to be harsh, but i think im with matic on this one...

09-02-2002, 05:17 PM	#4
ca18guy Premium Member Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Clearwater FL Age: 42 Posts: 3,226 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: ca18guy Feedback Score: 0 reviews	HAHAHA man that is awesome.

09-02-2002, 05:20 PM	#5
BEISSEN Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Woodbridge,VA Age: 42 Posts: 1,028 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Oh my lord another oneabe sorry but that just did not rhyme all that well parts did but not a very good rap"if thats what it was".I am witht the rest of the guys.

09-02-2002, 05:50 PM	#6
toddnappi Zilvia Junkie Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: NJ Age: 40 Posts: 439 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	that was pretty good. ever make beats on the computer? a couple of my friends have programs and have made some cool songs. you should try it out.

09-02-2002, 05:58 PM	#8
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	ur engine came from hong kong? try japan... and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow...                           sorry i couldnt resist

09-02-2002, 06:54 PM	#11
whateverjames Nissanaholic! Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: St. Louis Age: 45 Posts: 2,263 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (95exlude @ Sep. 01 2002,7:58)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">ur engine came from hong kong? try japan... and you make racing look like a grocery trip cuz ur that slow... sorry i couldnt resist</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'> it's possible that one could import an SR from hong kong. __________________ 02 Blazer X - 90 240SX w/SR oh noes

09-02-2002, 06:59 PM	#12
Rikadyn Leaky Injector Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 75 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	hmm...funny...MOVE prolly would record it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''>

09-02-2002, 07:05 PM	#13
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	sr was designed and blueprinted in japan   <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hehe.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hehe:'>

09-02-2002, 07:15 PM	#14
Rikadyn Leaky Injector Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 75 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	still would be possible to import a SR from Hong Kong...also</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote </td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'>

09-02-2002, 07:28 PM	#15
One-Eighty SX Zilvia Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 205 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	i think it was ahite but it could have better flow to it as well. Also the Sr20 maybe designed and blueprinted in japan but u forget 95exlude that japan can sell their cars to other countries as well. So im sure its possible to import it from hong kong. Just that its home is japan that is all

09-02-2002, 08:08 PM	#16
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	well transams are manufactured in canada...that doesnt mean they arent domestics -best example i can give ya

09-02-2002, 08:09 PM	#17
DriftMonkey Zilvia Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: North East Posts: 256 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	man you guys r harsh as hell....although i dont even like rap...i thought it was pretty good and i bet that half of you couldnt even write something as good....you ever try to write a poem...or a rap...it's hard as hell...props to you graphik __________________ Coastek240 still owes me a bumper or 82 bucks, which ever he decieds to send first.

09-02-2002, 08:14 PM	#18
graphikg04 Leaky Injector Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Pasadena Ca. Age: 38 Posts: 94 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG   And drift monkey is right. A poem or a rap is not an easy thing to do. You try doing it and let me see how it is, I would love to see it. And just for your information. This was a freestyle while I was typing. When I take my time I write things that seem professional. I write poems for girls and all, and they never fail. I can get any girl with any of my poems. If you want to test me, you can email me. I will give you a copy of the poem. Then you can give it to a girl you like, and I bet she will fall dead for you. YES, I am that confident. Ive done it more than enough times. If you want to test me, my email is --  [email protected] -- PEACE __________________ You feel sorry for me because I am weird. I feel sorry for you because you are the same. http://community.webshots.com/album/43433065kNExxW

09-02-2002, 08:17 PM	#19
camppain Will never get banned... Join Date: Sep 2001 Location: San Diego CA Age: 45 Posts: 1,510 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (matic 240sx @ Sep. 03 2002,07:25)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">if that was on the radio.. i would asume its the end of hip hop..</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'> im with the rest of them in saying its not good. i used to flow and i made beats but its not something imma make money off of. the rhyme scheme was to simple. to much first person "my 240 this" "i am beter at this" no real creativity imho. plus just cause its about a 240 does it make it a chat topic? __________________ -=-99 Sentra SE 5 speed-=- -=-95 240 SE 5 speed-=-

09-02-2002, 08:19 PM	#20
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (graphikg04 @ Sep. 02 2002,9:14)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">Man, some of you guys just dont get it. Does any body have the right to mess around anymore? I just wrote this to make some people laugh and all. But I cant even do that without someone else insulting me. I say that is just messed up. I wont mention names, but dayamn, just have fun with it. Everybody is so negative these days, and nobody can say anything nice anymore. If any of you can write something that will match this or even better, then I will give you the right to make fun of it. Otherwise, if you dont have the talent, you dont have the guts, or you just like crticizing people that can do things you cant because you are jealous, then I advise you guys to just sit back in your seat, shut up, and roll your mouse around to another topic. So peace. graphikG</td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'> Well you did what you wanted, it did make some of us laugh...and if they consider that talent then we have found exactly what is wrong with the music industry today.  We are just giving ya a hard time bro

09-02-2002, 08:59 PM	#21
shady Leaky Injector Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 75 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	why dont you post some of these proffesional raps or poems that can get any girl so we can laugh at you some more

09-02-2002, 09:10 PM	#22
-E- Post Whore! Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Florida, Americas Wang! Age: 43 Posts: 2,912 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	I liked it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'>

09-02-2002, 09:14 PM	#23
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	"Yo all, I like to write a lot. So just yesterday I was messing around, and I wrote this. Its about my 240sx. Its a little eggsagerated, but all rap is. Check it out, hope you like it. Here is a tip, read it to a clean beat. Then it will be like a rap and you will enjoy it more. So get a beat! Peace   Here it is. " i dont think something you wrote the day before is considered freestyle...

09-02-2002, 09:27 PM	#24
Yonkaz914 Leaky Injector Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Americas Wang AKA Fla Age: 38 Posts: 54 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''>

09-02-2002, 09:55 PM	#25
AceInHole Autox Technician Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: New Haven, CT Age: 44 Posts: 3,961 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: AceInHole Feedback Score: 0 reviews	<!--QuoteBegin--SR20Fastback+Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (SR20Fastback @ Sep. 01 2002,8<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wow.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':0'>7)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE">You guys are all harsh, it wasnt that bad at all. Shit if it was on the radio Id probably listen to it <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/thumbs-up.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':thumbsup:'></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'> if it was on the radio it'd be playing on 3 different stations on repeat... then again look at radio quality uke: "it's gettin hot in herre" __________________

09-02-2002, 10:08 PM	#26
95exlude Leaky Injector Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 61 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	</span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td>Quote (Yonkaz914 @ Sep. 02 2002,10:27)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hmmm.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':hmmm:'> Gees You People Are So Harsh On Him And Shit, Its Not Easy To Write Or Freestyle Anythin, Stop Hatin On Him, I Liked It, LOL <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'> Why Did You Capitalize Every Word In That Sentence?

09-02-2002, 10:21 PM	#28
matic 240sx Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: las vegas Age: 42 Posts: 798 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: matic 240sx Feedback Score: 0 reviews	<img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/dozingoff.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''>  what are you guys defending him for?  we are just saying our opinions..  and my opinion is it sucked..  tho im pretty sure that 80% of the hip-hop community will agree with me.. the other 20% will be to high to make a clear decision..   most of you listen to that cracka sh*t :x and yes.. im white  <img src="http://www.zilvia.net/f/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''> __________________ · m á † í ç · after9racing.com

09-02-2002, 10:29 PM	#29
S13Grl Married to the Mob Join Date: Dec 2000 Age: 44 Posts: 3,670 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	You guys are too harsh. Let's not get out of control.

09-02-2002, 10:33 PM	#30
AceInHole Autox Technician Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: New Haven, CT Age: 44 Posts: 3,961 Trader Rating: (0) Rides Gallery: AceInHole Feedback Score: 0 reviews	you know, what's really funny is that in winter I roll on Blizzaks, but people too used to the radio might just think my tires are black. __________________