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Actully i like this design more than the last one also. I think you should keep it big and fill up most of the shirt the way it is and in black and gold that would be awsome but take into account what the others were saying about making the ass phater and making the arms a little more lady like. Can't wait till its avalible. |
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Thanks for all the advice gentlemen, keep the opinions coming because these shirts are being sold to YOU so your opinions help me decide on what to do. Thanks, Mike Mancuso
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I support another fellow designer again. I may be releasing a few of my private one off desings to the community soon as well OR I'd be willing to team up with someone.
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The type is bad. work on the kerning of the UP. Its spaced out too much. The typeface on the back of the shirt is just bad. It looks 70s but not in a good way. The illustration is kinda boring. The umbrella looks messed up and the logos on the umbrella are skewed funny.
It looks like first year design student quality work. You wanted opinions. Not that I work at a famous ad agency or anything.
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![]() ![]() good shit so far. i think the umbrella should be moved up towards the right or be made bigger. images in the middle of the chest nvr look too good when its worn. fix the font a little on the quote and your good to go!
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