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Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 02:46 AM

UP FOR SALE NOW IN GROUP BUYS
http://www.zilvia.net/f/showthread.php?t=181939

Alright, I have had quite a few people asking me what is coming next for Jimmy Up. And for those that don't know, it's a clothing company that my best friend and I got started on zilvia for zilvia and I am sorry I lagged it on the new design but here is another one of my favorite designs that I PLAN on getting made next and I have spent some time tweaking and refinning it trying to make it look just perfect. The proceeds from the first design (look in the advertiser sales if you havent seen them) and the Gold Flake stickers are going straight into this next design, so I am pretty much riding on the hope that you are going to like it.

So again same rules apply, any feedback is good feedback and if you honestly think that it is a disgrace to shirt wearers world wide and the zilvia community then THROW IT ON HERE. Also, if you like it please post as well

I am going to pay my advertiser fee for the next month tomorrow, but this is just for feedback on the design NOT FOR SALES/ PRE ORDERS

Thank you,
Mike Mancuso
Jimmy Up

BEFORE

AFTER

And the NEW NEW version haha.

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 07:09 AM

No goods or bads?

blueshark123 · 02-27-2008, 07:14 AM

IDk i really like the first one better

RurouniMidnight · 02-27-2008, 08:02 AM

Hell yeah, i like this one a lot. Id buy another shirt with this design for sure.

CAPoweredS14 · 02-27-2008, 08:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RurouniMidnight

Hell yeah, i like this one a lot. Id buy another shirt with this design for sure.

Dammit, let me know what your getting so I don't get teh same thing. I find a thread and get excited about something just to find you already ordered it....twice...

DreamN · 02-27-2008, 08:20 AM

The chick's arm is too fat.

sijia10358 · 02-27-2008, 08:29 AM

that T-Shirts looks dope!!! black and gold FTW!

Tops* · 02-27-2008, 08:30 AM

I like this shirt a lot more than the first design. Maybe it's because I don't own an S13 coupe with Silvia front, but I think I like this design more regardless. I'd definitely have to order a shirt and a sticker.

sijia10358 · 02-27-2008, 08:34 AM

i wanna buy both the 1st and this t-shirt!! walking around with a Silvia on your shirt is pretty dope!!!

95KA-Turbo · 02-27-2008, 08:35 AM

I personally think the drawing looks like crap. You should get a real picture and trace it in illustrator or something. Just my opinion since you asked for it.

SDS13COUPE · 02-27-2008, 08:37 AM

I like it. I like the first one better. How about a Pignose or die shirt.

Slidin240Wayz · 02-27-2008, 08:38 AM

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Originally Posted by slidin_W.O.P

Smaller waist

Bigger rump

Smoother transition to the legs

I don't like the info on the right picture.

DreamN · 02-27-2008, 08:46 AM

^ Is right on point. I like it though. Would prefer it in a 3"x8" sticker though lol. Sorry, I'm a lil' picky on things I wear. I like crazy print T's.

drifterRS · 02-27-2008, 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DreamN

The chick's arm is too fat.

the chicks ass is not fat enough!! ill buy it for sure

Bubba · 02-27-2008, 09:22 AM

I prefer the design of the first shirt. A variation of the different body styles on the first design would be good in my eyes. I think more people would order if there was a larger selection like that.

This pic does need a little reworking, I would be more prone to wear a crazy design than this one though.

WagDatto · 02-27-2008, 09:27 AM

I agree with whoever said you should use a real picture (use your picture!!) and trace the outline. It'll come out looking way better IMO, but a great concept!

PS. If you need a body to draw, mine is ready and waiting....

**S13SilviaGirl** · 02-27-2008, 09:30 AM

Please take this to Off Topic next time as this has nothing to do with S/Z chassis. Thanks, and moving it for you now...

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 95KA-Turbo

I personally think the drawing looks like crap. You should get a real picture and trace it in illustrator or something. Just my opinion since you asked for it.

Quote:

Originally Posted by WagDatto

I agree with whoever said you should use a real picture (use your picture!!) and trace the outline. It'll come out looking way better IMO, but a great concept!

PS. If you need a body to draw, mine is ready and waiting....

Thats actually a great idea, Im doin it tonight and it's either going to be WagDatto's body or this sexy little lady I know.

Updates by tomorrow night

Quote:

Originally Posted by SDS13COUPE

I like it. I like the first one better. How about a Pignose or die shirt.

I dont want to be the brand that just throws cars on shirts and calls it a day because thats just being another one of those, I will definitely work cars (mostly nissans) into a lot of designs but there needs to be some out there without.

Quote:

Originally Posted by DreamN

^ Is right on point. I like it though. Would prefer it in a 3"x8" sticker though lol. Sorry, I'm a lil' picky on things I wear. I like crazy print T's.

Don't worry, more designs to come- just running this by everybody.

Quote:

Originally Posted by S13SilviaGirl

Please take this to Off Topic next time as this has nothing to do with S/Z chassis. Thanks, and moving it for you now...

Thank you very much for moving it and I will post in off topic next time.

jackjack · 02-27-2008, 10:40 AM

i think the chick takes up too much of the shirt.

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 10:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jackjack

i think the chick takes up too much of the shirt.

It's not so much the girl as it is the umbrella, I was actually thinking about moving her over to be on the side of the shirt, because if I shrink her- it looks like there is not enough on the shirt.

jfc3po · 02-27-2008, 10:55 AM

after you work out the kinks....im definately down...i really like this design, except for the "Supporting Hard Driving" part on the bottom of the back...also, why does it just say UP on the back?

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 11:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jfc3po

after you work out the kinks....im definately down...i really like this design, except for the "Supporting Hard Driving" part on the bottom of the back...also, why does it just say UP on the back?

Well I the only reason I went plain on the first design is the simple fact that our funds did not allow us to put something on the back. Now, they do.

This is what my partner and myself both agreed on and personally, I like it.
The reason behind it is to offer something to customers (you, haha) that wasnt another run of the mill car shirt.

Keep suggestions coming.

AM I SAFE SAYING THAT THE CONCEPT IS GOOD AND THIS SHOULD BE THE NEXT DESIGN?
The lady just needs some fine tweaking (or a new body)

RurouniMidnight · 02-27-2008, 12:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CAPoweredS14

Dammit, let me know what your getting so I don't get teh same thing. I find a thread and get excited about something just to find you already ordered it....twice...

Lol, C'mon you don't wanna be twinkies.

Actully i like this design more than the last one also. I think you should keep it big and fill up most of the shirt the way it is and in black and gold that would be awsome but take into account what the others were saying about making the ass phater and making the arms a little more lady like. Can't wait till its avalible.

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RurouniMidnight

Lol, C'mon you don't wanna be twinkies.

Actully i like this design more than the last one also. I think you should keep it big and fill up most of the shirt the way it is and in black and gold that would be awsome but take into account what the others were saying about making the ass phater and making the arms a little more lady like. Can't wait till its avalible.

Yea, it's going to be worked out tonight and I will throw the edited version up by tomorrow morning.

Thanks for all the advice gentlemen, keep the opinions coming because these shirts are being sold to YOU so your opinions help me decide on what to do.

Thanks,
Mike Mancuso

powersteeringless180sx · 02-27-2008, 05:02 PM

i like it alot but the chick needs to be more curvacious.

TheRonTom31 · 02-27-2008, 05:13 PM

I support another fellow designer again. I may be releasing a few of my private one off desings to the community soon as well OR I'd be willing to team up with someone.

Frosty_spl · 02-27-2008, 06:55 PM

The type is bad. work on the kerning of the UP. Its spaced out too much. The typeface on the back of the shirt is just bad. It looks 70s but not in a good way. The illustration is kinda boring. The umbrella looks messed up and the logos on the umbrella are skewed funny.

It looks like first year design student quality work.

You wanted opinions. Not that I work at a famous ad agency or anything.

SC_S13 · 02-27-2008, 07:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by powersteeringless180sx

i like it alot but the chick needs to be more curvacious.

no she has to be stick thin, make sure you vector in the rib cage

good shit so far. i think the umbrella should be moved up towards the right or be made bigger. images in the middle of the chest nvr look too good when its worn. fix the font a little on the quote and your good to go!

SimpleSexy180 · 02-27-2008, 07:09 PM

ass is fine. its mainly the arm is whats throwing it off.

Jimmy Up · 02-27-2008, 07:13 PM

it will be edited tomorrow

the only reason I went with that font on the slogan is because that is the slogan I went with on the stickers and the first shirt.
I'll try changing it up tonight to a script and I also want to hollow out the UP, just make it the outline of the letters and maybe throw a design in there.

THE GIRL IS GOING TO BE COMPLETELY REMODELED BY TOMORROW.

Keep it coming, believe it or not I am taking all of this into consideration for the final design of the shirt.

Thank you very much for all of the help.

Mike Mancuso

02-27-2008, 02:46 AM	#1
Jimmy Up Zilvia.net GB Vendor Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: SoCal {covina} Age: 36 Posts: 4,038 Trader Rating: (52) Rides Gallery: Jimmy Up Feedback Score: 52 reviews	Jimmy Up- New design UP FOR SALE NOW IN GROUP BUYS http://www.zilvia.net/f/showthread.php?t=181939 Alright, I have had quite a few people asking me what is coming next for Jimmy Up. And for those that don't know, it's a clothing company that my best friend and I got started on zilvia for zilvia and I am sorry I lagged it on the new design but here is another one of my favorite designs that I PLAN on getting made next and I have spent some time tweaking and refinning it trying to make it look just perfect. The proceeds from the first design (look in the advertiser sales if you havent seen them) and the Gold Flake stickers are going straight into this next design, so I am pretty much riding on the hope that you are going to like it. So again same rules apply, any feedback is good feedback and if you honestly think that it is a disgrace to shirt wearers world wide and the zilvia community then THROW IT ON HERE. Also, if you like it please post as well I am going to pay my advertiser fee for the next month tomorrow, but this is just for feedback on the design NOT FOR SALES/ PRE ORDERS Thank you, Mike Mancuso Jimmy Up BEFORE AFTER And the NEW NEW version haha. __________________ WWW.JIMMYUP.COM Last edited by Jimmy Up; 03-13-2008 at 10:50 PM..

02-27-2008, 07:09 AM	#2
Jimmy Up Zilvia.net GB Vendor Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: SoCal {covina} Age: 36 Posts: 4,038 Trader Rating: (52) Rides Gallery: Jimmy Up Feedback Score: 52 reviews	No goods or bads? __________________ WWW.JIMMYUP.COM

02-27-2008, 08:02 AM	#4
RurouniMidnight Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Houston TX Age: 42 Posts: 1,245 Trader Rating: (12) Feedback Score: 12 reviews	Hell yeah, i like this one a lot. Id buy another shirt with this design for sure. __________________ http://nightparade.wordpress.com/ Join in on instagram @nightparade

02-27-2008, 08:20 AM	#6
DreamN Post Whore! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: SoCal - 818 Age: 40 Posts: 10,692 Trader Rating: (54) Rides Gallery: DreamN Feedback Score: 54 reviews	The chick's arm is too fat. __________________ - Jimmy Wanted: TBD For Sale: TBD

02-27-2008, 08:29 AM	#7
sijia10358 Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: SoCal! 626! Age: 35 Posts: 1,075 Trader Rating: (4) Feedback Score: 4 reviews	that T-Shirts looks dope!!! black and gold FTW! __________________ [email protected] TIRE CENTRAL "DONALD" 626-227-0150 DRIFT SPEED "QUOC" 562-342-9000

02-27-2008, 07:14 AM	#3
blueshark123 Post Whore! Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: North Jersey Posts: 5,481 Trader Rating: (55) Feedback Score: 55 reviews	IDk i really like the first one better

02-27-2008, 08:30 AM	#8
Tops* Zilvia Addict Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: SF, CA Age: 37 Posts: 966 Trader Rating: (6) Feedback Score: 6 reviews	I like this shirt a lot more than the first design. Maybe it's because I don't own an S13 coupe with Silvia front, but I think I like this design more regardless. I'd definitely have to order a shirt and a sticker.

02-27-2008, 08:34 AM	#9
sijia10358 Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: SoCal! 626! Age: 35 Posts: 1,075 Trader Rating: (4) Feedback Score: 4 reviews	i wanna buy both the 1st and this t-shirt!! walking around with a Silvia on your shirt is pretty dope!!! __________________ [email protected] TIRE CENTRAL "DONALD" 626-227-0150 DRIFT SPEED "QUOC" 562-342-9000

02-27-2008, 08:35 AM	#10
95KA-Turbo Post Whore! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: LA Age: 39 Posts: 3,402 Trader Rating: (19) Feedback Score: 19 reviews	I personally think the drawing looks like crap. You should get a real picture and trace it in illustrator or something. Just my opinion since you asked for it.

02-27-2008, 08:37 AM	#11
SDS13COUPE Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: May 2006 Location: San Diego Age: 39 Posts: 1,403 Trader Rating: (19) Feedback Score: 19 reviews	I like it. I like the first one better. How about a Pignose or die shirt.

02-27-2008, 08:46 AM	#13
DreamN Post Whore! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: SoCal - 818 Age: 40 Posts: 10,692 Trader Rating: (54) Rides Gallery: DreamN Feedback Score: 54 reviews	^ Is right on point. I like it though. Would prefer it in a 3"x8" sticker though lol. Sorry, I'm a lil' picky on things I wear. I like crazy print T's. __________________ - Jimmy Wanted: TBD For Sale: TBD

02-27-2008, 09:22 AM	#15
Bubba Zilvia Junkie Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Biloxi, MS Age: 41 Posts: 352 Trader Rating: (2) Feedback Score: 2 reviews	I prefer the design of the first shirt. A variation of the different body styles on the first design would be good in my eyes. I think more people would order if there was a larger selection like that. This pic does need a little reworking, I would be more prone to wear a crazy design than this one though. __________________ Good at wrenching, terrible at electrical. Lord help me... HAHAHA

02-27-2008, 09:27 AM	#16
WagDatto Zilvia FREAK! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Sacramento, NorCal Posts: 1,283 Trader Rating: (6) Rides Gallery: WagDatto Feedback Score: 6 reviews	I agree with whoever said you should use a real picture (use your picture!!) and trace the outline. It'll come out looking way better IMO, but a great concept! PS. If you need a body to draw, mine is ready and waiting.... __________________ http://garagezoku.blogspot.com

02-27-2008, 10:40 AM	#19
jackjack Post Whore! Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Chi Posts: 2,899 Trader Rating: (2) Feedback Score: 2 reviews	i think the chick takes up too much of the shirt.

02-27-2008, 10:55 AM	#21
jfc3po Zilvia Junkie Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Raleigh, NC Age: 38 Posts: 348 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	after you work out the kinks....im definately down...i really like this design, except for the "Supporting Hard Driving" part on the bottom of the back...also, why does it just say UP on the back? __________________

02-27-2008, 05:02 PM	#25
powersteeringless180sx Zilvia Addict Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: SoCal (Orange County) Age: 43 Posts: 868 Trader Rating: (1) Feedback Score: 1 reviews	i like it alot but the chick needs to be more curvacious. __________________

02-27-2008, 05:13 PM	#26
TheRonTom31 Zilvia Addict Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Saratoga, NY Age: 42 Posts: 775 Trader Rating: (0) Feedback Score: 0 reviews	I support another fellow designer again. I may be releasing a few of my private one off desings to the community soon as well OR I'd be willing to team up with someone.

02-27-2008, 06:55 PM	#27
Frosty_spl Zilvia Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: ATL Age: 44 Posts: 268 Trader Rating: (1) Feedback Score: 1 reviews	The type is bad. work on the kerning of the UP. Its spaced out too much. The typeface on the back of the shirt is just bad. It looks 70s but not in a good way. The illustration is kinda boring. The umbrella looks messed up and the logos on the umbrella are skewed funny. It looks like first year design student quality work. You wanted opinions. Not that I work at a famous ad agency or anything. __________________

02-27-2008, 07:09 PM	#29
SimpleSexy180 Post Whore! Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Cal Posts: 4,750 Trader Rating: (8) Rides Gallery: SimpleSexy180 Feedback Score: 8 reviews	ass is fine. its mainly the arm is whats throwing it off.

02-27-2008, 07:13 PM	#30
Jimmy Up Zilvia.net GB Vendor Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: SoCal {covina} Age: 36 Posts: 4,038 Trader Rating: (52) Rides Gallery: Jimmy Up Feedback Score: 52 reviews	it will be edited tomorrow the only reason I went with that font on the slogan is because that is the slogan I went with on the stickers and the first shirt. I'll try changing it up tonight to a script and I also want to hollow out the UP, just make it the outline of the letters and maybe throw a design in there. THE GIRL IS GOING TO BE COMPLETELY REMODELED BY TOMORROW. Keep it coming, believe it or not I am taking all of this into consideration for the final design of the shirt. Thank you very much for all of the help. Mike Mancuso __________________ WWW.JIMMYUP.COM